So self assured
I thought
They
go about their
business
with intent and
confidence
like landed gentry
enter any environment
oblivious to the squabbling and
jostling of others
bathe at will and
oft-times in public
indulge in sex when and where
and with whomsoever
all with panache
and assumed acceptance
They
command universal love
even from
rough-haired youth
armed with
new-found swagger and
BB guns
who seldom
aim their way
Then
an adolescent of the breed
puffed up-scruffy
uncomfortable in his skin
unsure in his grooming
and investing too much effort
in his awkward movements
fled without elegance
or economy when
challenged by a
smaller foe
and reminded me:
robins, too, have
an awkward stage
Wonderful! Your poem carries such a deep wisdom!
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Thank you Read on. Your comment means a lot to me because it came from you.
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I never thought of Robins having sex, but those beautifully colored eggs have to come from somewhere don’t they?
Kidding aside, this was lovely and provocative!
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I’m glad you enjoyed my poem. I’m getting braver about sharing my attempts. The antics of the robins in our yard this morning demanded a poem from me, and I had fun writing it.
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Love it!!! Your poem made me smile.
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I’m glad you enjoyed my adolescent robins, Shelley.
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This is my first spring in 30 years that was heralded by robins! I could see them in the San Diego County Mountains, and I did, but it’s not the same as noticing spring’s first robin. This is a lovely poem! Thank you.
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I never tire of robins, Martha, and you’re so right about the happiness they cause by showing up in the spring after a Colorado winter. Because of our unusually warm March, they showed up earlier than usual this year: thus, the adolescents.
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Your poem and photo gave me a lovely beginning to my day. Thanks.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed them and took the time to tell me so, because that made my day!
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I saw my first Robin in the yard today.
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Did you sit yourself down and write a poem about it?
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LOL I’m not the poet guy. But I smiled.
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And a smile is a nice reward to give a writer. Thank you.
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When my daughter was a toddler, she actually believed she could catch a robin. It continued to “bob” out of reach until she realized she couldn’t get close enough to hold it. I still laugh about that day. Thank you!
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What a delightful visual your comment created for me: a toddler in pursuit of a robin: a perfect picture of spring.
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Thank you! Enjoy your posts. Looking forward to more.
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I’ll be visiting your blog as well, so watch for me there.
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I love this! I’d like to add, even 55 year old women have an awkward stage. It’s nice to know that we share our awkwardness with all God’s creatures.
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I’m glad you liked the poem, Joni, and I, in turn, got a chuckle out of your comment, which reminded me that even 72 year old women have an awkward stage. If you saw my hair today, you’d agree that I’m in one.
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Beautiful work….your talents amaze me…… 🙂
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Thank you, Lucie. I don’t know if its talent so much as determination and hard work when it comes to poetry, but I think I’m getting a feel for it.
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All 3, I’m sure, Janet!!! 🙂
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I appreciate your faith in my abilities, Lucie.
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I had to laugh at the last line, this is a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it
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So good to hear from you, Katie. I’m glad you liked the poem. I had fun writing it.
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This is great. Really captured the nature and brought smiles to my face. Thanks.
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I’m glad I made you smile, Laurel.
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Remember I have a tie, for when you accept the Pulitzer Prize. Pure delight Janet- odd, I live on the harbor, rife with Gulls, Racoons, and Crows, yet perhaps it to was our warm March, the Dawn Chorus of Robinsong has been loud every morning. For awkward youth, give me the crow newly turfed, parents nearby, but oh the whinging. An elderly gent recently called 911, to report deer having intercourse in his back yard. Thanks, your poem made my evening..
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A dawn chorus of robinsong sounds wonderful, and I enjoyed your description of adolescent crows. As for the elderly gent, whatever was he thinking — or not. Please feel free to wear your tie whenever the spirit moves you. It could go out of fashion waiting for my Pulitzer.
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I was given the tie in 1979- it is holding up well. So pffllug- Can hear the birdies as I type..morning persons like us.
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I, too, heard robins and various kin chattering away this morning during my early morning walk. So you’re a morning person too. Pleased to meet you. I don’t meet many who are.
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Delightful poem, and could probably be symbolic of some of those humans amongst us!! 🙂
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Yes, I think it does speak to human kind as well, Barbara.
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A charming description, and I agree robins have the confidence of “landed gentry. I’ve noticed at late dusk a robin is the last bird trill I hear, almost like telling the neighborhood birds to be still and rest…but that could just be my imagination?
Will you treat us to another poem, please. It is National Poetry Month.
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If it is your imagination it’s a delightful imagining. I’d like to think it’s a robin, though. I can’t guarantee another poem this month, but I promise to be alert for a poetry-inspiring moment and, if one chances by, I’ll try to take advantage of it. You’ll recognize it: I’ll title it “For Mary.”
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A poem titled “For Mary” would be the highest honor. I’m a little nervous though because you’ve known me through some very “awkward stages”.
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Oh, yes, we’ve helped each other through a few of those. Maybe I should write a poem about your secret garden.
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My friend Mike, (Lonewolf), who observes these things recently shared the Latin term for Robin- a bit chuckly -guffaw- you miss too much not getting up early, prefer to sleep in afternoon, cheers.
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A bit chuckly. Please than Mike for that tremendously pleasing bit of information.
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Wonderful poem, Janet!
I loved that last line. Isn’t it great to know there are moments we share with all living creatures?
I’m so glad you took that poetry class—I’m looking forward to reading more of your creative efforts!
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It is true, Rita, that in the moment I watched the actions of the adolescent robin I felt a kinship with it and all living creatures. I appreciate your recognition and sharing of that feeling.
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Awe, a poem! A fitting one at that, with wit beyond most, drawing me in to your rhythm and dance with your words. My favorite after the ending…”they command universal love…” That whole set is marvelous.
I see Spring is kind to you, Janet. I love that you shared this gem.
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Love the poem,,,, so beautiful and thoughtful it is
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Thank you, Himali.
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